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mschoenitz I love how you have the talking in the beginning- it almost sets the tone of the song before it even begins. I like the mix a lot but at about 2 minutes, im looking for a little change or something special.

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music2kelly Nice use of panning. You have a nice close capture of the guitar, I like the fact that you can hear the fingers on the string. The chorus is big in contrast to the verses. You got a huge sound from two voices and guitar :) Just to be picky for a moment, you can hear movement after the last note and it kinda kills the moment. As a side note a shaker added in the middle of the song could on the choruses have brought it to another level :) Nice work!

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Neal Schmitt Congrats on your prize. This is a moving, powerful piece. The changes you made, especially in your narration, were spot on, making this piece even stronger. Great music, nice editing and a strong showcase of your talents as a story teller. great job! Your mom did well.

about 4 years ago

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mschoenitz I like this. Very mellow. The flang/phaser is an interesting vibe.

about 4 years ago

Neal Schmitt There are the right pieces, but the arrangement is off. The guitar parts, the pads - sound good. There are note issues. Write down the root chord form the guitar part and build from that - some of the parts are very random. this could be a very cool piece with some effort. Nice use of the stereo field! About halfway through, some of the sounds become less distinguisable.

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mschoenitz The guitar is very raw, I like that but it is over powering to the rest of the parts. It would have been cool to hear the drums change with the guitar part. Good Job!

about 4 years ago

Neal Schmitt Hrm? I'm not a fan. Are you? The drum sounds are cool. The programming seems very haphazard and random. The guitar part is ok but is no gelling with the drums - I'm guessing the guitar part may have been recorded first? I'm not real sure with what's going on here. I say take another stab. If the guitar part was recorded first, and not to a click, your out of luck. If the drums were programmed and the guitar was layed on top, different story. Not a better one, just a different one.

about 4 years ago

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mschoenitz Groooovy. I like the panning effect. There may be a few timing issues. Overall, a pretty springy track. Good Job.

about 4 years ago

music2kelly Nice banjo! I can see a guy sitting on his back porch in the spring time and just playing away :)

about 4 years ago

Neal Schmitt The concept for this piece is nice but the pieces don't quite line up, rhythm wise or note-wise. I guess it has the back porch feel but too me it sounds a bit off. the tambourine panning is nice. There's some clipping around the 40 second mark. The sound choice is nice in this piece too, but execution is a bit off.

about 4 years ago